I see a blue and yellow sky
I hear a loud sound
I taste nothing
I feel fear in my head
I think it’s getting closer
I sense that it’s going to rain
I know it is coming
I believe that I’m going to be safe
I imagine that I was somewhere else
I wonder if I’m going to be alright
I guess it is coming.
Art technique:
PAINTING / COLLAGE
KILLER WAVES
Without fear
Water destroyed their lives
It was an unbelievable thing
Why there was a giant wave;
Tourists and workers were watching
As the waves were getting bigger
And just when the water hit their feet
It was too late to run for their lives.
With tears in their eyes
The world watched.
People should take a trip to Asia
And give a helping hand.
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LOVE
Love is like a cruise on a red ocean
Where fishes are of different shapes and sizes
Love is a cruise to boys
When we fall in love
Love is the sweetest thing
When you're in it.
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OH I WISH! I WISH!
Oh! I wish! I wish!
I was a superbowl football player
Oh! I wish! I wish!
I was not living in a bad world
Oh! I wish! I wish!
I can see my father again
Oh! I wish! I wish!
I can see my grandparents
Oh! I wish! I wish!
My family can see them again.
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THANK YOU LORD
Thank you Lord
for letting me live another day
Thank you Lord
for my ever kind mother
Thank you Lord
for my peaceful home
Thank you Lord
that I have food on my table
Thank you Lord
for everything.
6 comments:
Your poem is very touching and very expressive. Keep writing!
Dan, I am touched by your words... that came from your heart. I even like the tone of your poem. I look forward to reading more of your poems and other written works!
Hey Guys,
I read some of your work! Excellent!!!
Keep it up. Writing and paintings the best way we express our feelings. Our brain remember pictures, and simple organized words in poems are an expression that stays the longest in our mind.
Thanks for sharing your work to the world, let them know how you feel and share the world. Keep it up kids!!!
I think you are right about love Dan! All those fish! Good job.
Hey Dan,
Great poem, great writing.
Hi Dan,
I am a teacher in D.C. and your teacher is teaching us about blogging. You already know how to do this. I love your poems. Keep up the good work. I am going to learn how to do this also. I chose your poems because my father and my brother share the same name as you.
Good luck.
Ms. D
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