PAINTING / COLLAGE
NEVER SEEN
Never seen the golden sun shine like this
Nvere seen the moon as bright as this
Never seen a star shot like this
Never seen a refreshing waterfalls like this...
Never seen a flower bloom like this
Never seen a cheerful girl like her
Never seen a person sad like him
Never seen a lady cry like her.
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I am a good boxer.
I wonder how to drive a car.
I hear when someone is getting hurt
I see very good
I want to know how it is to have a brother
I am Elvin.
I pretend to be in the nfl I feel very bad when.
I feel very bad when I fail in my work.
I touch my family to make them feel better.
I worry about my family.
I cry when my sister got a whipping.
I am Elvin.
I understand what my sister is going through
I say not in se but I am in it.
I dream about having a car.
I try to get out of se.
I hope I don’t go back in se any more.
I am Elvin.
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Young man
Active and good
Playful and cleaning and talking
Dream to be a football player and a boxer
Elvin.
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E enjoy playing with friends
L love my family
V very helpful
I in the house all the time
N nice to my family and friends.
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I know how you feel
When they talk about you when you ask for money
Because sometimes I don’t have money too.
I know how you feel
And it makes me feel sad
Because sometimes I have nothing too.
I know how you feel
When I walk past you and smell your stench
Because sometimes I stink too.
I know how you feel
When I see you cold and shaking during winter
Because I could be freezing during winter too.
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I CRY FOR LITTLE BOY
I cry for little boy who got hit by the car.
I cry for little boy who died in his mother’s arms.
I cry for little boy who lost his way home.
I cry for little boy who was taken from his family.
I cry for the little boy who did not know how to talk
I cry for the little boy who did not know how to write his name
I cry for the little boy who has no arm
I cry for the little boy who had no food or no way to sleep.
I cry for the little boy who was left on the street
I cry for the little boy whose mother was on drugs
I cry for the little boy who died from overdose
I cry for the little boy who died from AIDS.
I cry for the little boy who’s scared of the dark
I cry for the little boy who had no education
I cry for the little boy who could not do things that other kids could
I cry for the little boy who everyone left alone.
8 comments:
I am not a poet, nor do pretend to appreciate poetry. But your poem "I Cry for Little Boy", I actually enjoyed reading and it touched me deeply. I hope to see more of your work in the future.
Elvin,
This is poem "I Cry For Little Boy" depicts some of our society's most serious problems. Well written, very poignant. One of the best works of my students. Congratulations for finishing your 3rd advisory project this early!
hey I'm LiL D I like your poams you most be good
To Elvin: I write some poetry now and then. Consider myself an amateur poet. Have formed a amateur poetry writing circle and you know, Elvin, your piece can easily rank among the best that's been posted in the group.
You are most welcome to join the group, if appropriate. That's what I like about the online group. We are judged by our works, and little else. We're at http://yahoogroups.com/group/seeds_o_light2004
Elvin, my favourite of your poems is the one that begins "Never seen." I like the images of nature as well as people. It made me think, and that is what poetry is all about.
elvin, i enjoyed your poem very much. and i wish most people would have the same caring feeling as you.
to elvin:
i like your "i cry for little boy" best. i was deeply touched. keep up the good work & God bless you!
teachersol:
thanks for sharing your students' work. it reminds us that children are exeptional humans - innocent yet sensitive to things going on around them.
Hey Elvin,
Love your poem.. it speaks of a caring soul.
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